back to the drawing board

I have finally read the first few pages of Secrets of Cats. I don't really like the premise but it is a good study in how to create a world and how to write about it. The first draft I posted yesterday is not up to par in the writing, I need to come at it from a different angle. I need an outline to work from. I can envision the world I want to write very clearly but that is only the first step in this process. I need to go back to planning and get that right before I write anymore.